The forest had always been full of wonder for me. The way the sunlight
filtered in through the trees or the scent of the woods after a summer rain.
Everything about it seemed magical.
Regardless of the weather, every day I walked its paths and
uncharted ground alike, unwilling to spend my time elsewhere.
Everything about this place
feels so wrong.
“Neena!” my mother snapped, whispering angrily under her breath. “Get
your head out of the clouds!”
I smiled politely at the pair of people at the table across from
me. We were at some fancy new Italian restaurant downtown, and I could feel the
weight of my mother’s gaze. The air
conditioning is nearly as cold as that look.
“So, Hunter, what do you like to do?” I tried, ignoring the urge to
bolt and never come back. The man in front of me’s mother made eye contact with
my own like my question meant something.
I wish I could just fake
being ill again. It had worked three blessed times before my mother figured
it out.
“Hunting,” he replied, nodding his head.
“Really,” I managed breathlessly. I care too much about the creatures in the forest to even fathom it. Could
Mother have picked a worse ‘suitor’?
I knew he was talking, but it just sounded like meaningless babble.
“Deer are my favorite,” he finished as I caught the tail end of
whatever he was talking about.
“Me too!” Maybe I was wrong.
Maybe I can do this.
“Really? Do you use guns or arrows?” His eyes lit up in interest.
I stood woozily. That is not
what I meant at all.
“They’re my favorite animal.” I shook my head. “Excuse me, I need
to go to the restroom.” Squeezing past my mom, I made it safely into the
bathroom. How long before the check
arrives?
*
“He is a perfectly nice boy. I don’t see what the problem is!” my
mother insisted on the drive home.
“Even after I told him I love deer, he spent twenty minutes talking
about the best ways to skin one!”
“Well at least you’d never grow hungry with a man like that. I don’t
know how you think you’re going to survive with an Environmental Studies
degree.”
I banged my head lightly into the glass window. I don’t need anything but the forest.
As soon as she pulled up in front of our house, I leaped out and
made a break for the woods.
“You better be back inside before dark!” she called after me.
Just how old does she think I
am?
I sighed, finally relaxing in the quiet sounds of the forest. If I could just live here, I would.
I followed my favorite path, relishing in the familiar sights. There is no place like this. Nothing else in
this world brings me this joy.
I took a right near one of the larger moss beds and ascended the
hill. When I reached the top, the view of the sunset disappearing beneath the
trees assuaged my irritation and bitter resignation left over from the day. “As
long as this is here, I need nothing else.”
I stood and waited until all of the color had drained from the sky.
“It’s so peaceful.” Every time my mother forced me to meet another guy
or berated my love for nature was washed away by the tranquility of the night.
Just before I was about to go, I saw a flash of light down the
hill.
What was that? Carefully
making my way through the dark, I descended down to where I thought I’d seen
the light.
“Nobody’s here.” I glanced around, but there wasn’t even a sign
that someone had recently passed through. “What did I see then?”
Despite having excellent night vision, the forest seemed especially
dark here. “Was this evergreen always here?”
It was massive, much taller than the other trees surrounding it.
Behind it stood a whole grove of beautiful pines.
Transfixed, I walked towards the secret I had stumbled upon. Moving
reverently around the largest tree, I came into an open space. It was full of
dancing lights, far more than I’d seen from the top of the hill.
There’s no way this is
possible. Colors swirled around me as I basked in the warmth. Yet it feels so right.
“Neena,” a quiet voice behind me whispered, and I startled.
“How do you know my name?” A tall thin man stood before me, swathed
in rich shades of green.
His laugh was music and the wind whistling through the trees. “Because
you belong here.” He gestured to the quiet area, and the words rang true in my
heart.
“Who are you?”
“I am Evergreen. This grove is sacred. It is only visible to those
it chooses.” He stared into my eyes. “You are kind and pure-hearted. You know
only love for these woods.”
“They are my greatest treasure. They’ve always been my home.”
His smile was sunlight through the trees, it was beauty incarnate.
“Stay. Spend your days with us.” He stretched his hand out to me.
And I took it.
Author's Note: To be honest, I forgot it was Wednesday today. But I still think this came together better than last week's Native American tale. The story I chose this time was of Neen-i-zu, an effervescent girl whose mother tries to set her up with a hunter. She refuses, but the wedding is decided upon anyway. When she goes for a walk, she disappears, and later the hunter says he saw her in the Sacred Grove with a fairy named Evergreen.
I wanted to take this story and make it a bit more modern and actually detail Evergreen and Neen-i-zu's meeting. I gave Neen-i-zu a more plain name but kept the name Evergreen. I decided to actually name the hunter character Hunter to make him feel even more one-note.
While this story didn't turn out like I imagined, I'm not mad at it.
Bibliography: "The Fairy Bride" published by Henry Schoolcraft
Image Information: "Forest Evergreen" by Unsplash.
Even though this is a last minute story, I think you did great with it! In the beginning, I was a little confused since the suitor's name was Hunter then they said Hunt. I thought it was a nickname. After continuing I realized that he was saying he enjoyed hunting. This was a cute story and I think you did great for last minute!
ReplyDeleteI got goosebumps when you compared her mother’s look to the cold air conditioning.
ReplyDeleteI think her mother’s command about being home before dark and Neena’s silent response of her questioning her mother was actually funny because she did bolt out of the car as soon as she saw the woods. I immediately visualized an angsty-teenager throwing a tantrum; but I do understand that feeling of needing escape as quickly as possible. Before reading your author’s note, Evergreen reminded me of the tales about fairy circles and how the fae would kidnap people; however, I like how you retold the story focusing on Neena and Evergreen’s meeting.
I enjoyed reading it, good job!
I love your image you chose for this story. It caught my eye right off the bat. Also, I loved the comparison of her mother’s look and the air conditioning. That was a great little detail. The inclusion of her personal thoughts really made me like the story more. You built the suspense for the story in a perfect way. I think your story was awesome! The changes you made really seemed to take the story to the next level.
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